Personal Responsibility

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All key elements of the assignment described below are covered in a substantive way. | |
Write a 1,050- to 1,100-word paper expanding your Personal Responsibility Essay by incorporating feedback from your facilitator and teammates, and including the following: An introductionProperly cited and referenced research from library sources A plan to incorporate effective strategies for success as a studentA conclusionReference page   * Format your essay consistent with APA guidelines. | Good, but you’re letting anecdotes and sidetrips pull you away from the main point.   But your writing voice is compelling and effective. |
Major points are stated clearly; are supported by specific details, examples, or analysis; and are organized logically. | |
Readability and Style   2 Points | Points Earned1.6/2 |
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The tone is appropriate to the content and assignment. | |
Sentences are complete, clear, and concise. | |
Sentences are well constructed, strong, and varied. | |
Sentence transitions are present and maintain the flow of thought. | |
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Mechanics 2 Points | Points Earned 1.7/2 |
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Rules of grammar, usage, and punctuation are followed. | |
Spelling is correct. | |
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Total 10 Points | Points Earned 8.5/10 |
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