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Persuasive Essay: Peer Review Worksheet
Part of your responsibility as a student in this course is to provide quality feedback to your peers that will help them to improve their writing skills. This worksheet will assist you in providing that feedback. Copy and paste the completed review into your reply to the post containing the assigned draft. Do not post your review as an attachment.
Name of the Draft’s Author: Kelsey Johnson
Name of the Peer Reviewer: Michael Julian
After reading through the draft one time, write a summary (3–5 sentences) of the paper. This essay identifies why abortion should be illegal. It presents evidence to support the health risks and how it can be seen as murder. Makes the argument that abortion is not safe and not the only option
This essay identifies why abortion should be illegal. It presents evidence to support the health risks and how it can be seen as murder. Makes the argument that abortion is not safe and not the only option
Evaluate the Essay
After a second, closer reading of the draft, evaluate the essay using the Persuasive Essay: Final Draft rubric. Determine the level of achievement appropriate for each assignment criteria. (Level of achievement ranges from Unsatisfactory to Excellent and are found at the top of the rubric. Assignment criteria are found in the left column of the rubric.)
Identifies and Summarizes Topic
* What level of achievement did the author score for this criterion? Excellent
* What evidence do you have for this score?
Kelsey identifies that abortion should stay illegal and should not be legalized making the argument of how it is killing a life, women are endangered, and less mental anguish to women.
Identifies and Reflects upon Assumptions
* What level of achievement did the author score for this criterion?