Passage Analysis

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Prompt:
In a well-organized essay, discuss how the author’s use of language-particularly diction, dialogue, and selection of detail-serves to develop and/or compare the characters of Tom Buchanan and Jay Gatsby.

Thesis:
By using confrontational dialogue and the contemptuous tone during the dialogue, Fitzgerald portrays that the characters of Tom Buchanan and Jay Gatsby are in fact very similar. Topic Sentence:
Fitzgerald emphasizes Tom and Gatsby’s similar characteristic of being possessive using contemptuous tone throughout argumentative dialogue. Topic Sentence:
The author projects the trait of dominance in both Gatsby and Tom by provoking dialogue with contemptuous tone. Topic Sentence:
Both Tom and Gatsby go through mood changes as you can see through contemptuous tone in challenging dialogue.

Intro:
Love is often forgotten in the vision of winning. Sometimes the competitive nature in people comes out and now the goal is only focused on winning, not for the prize, but for the victory over the opponent. Both Tom Buchanan and Jay Gatsby are in love with Daisy, so they say, but perhaps they care more about beating the other than having Daisy. Being so belligerent towards each other, you can see the hatred they have for the other. It’s surprising to find that the characters are alike in many of their thoughts and wants. By using confrontational dialogue and the contemptuous tone during the dialogue, Fitzgerald portrays that the characters of Tom Buchanan and Jay Gatsby are in fact very similar. Body Paragraph:

The author projects the trait of dominance in both Gatsby and Tom by provoking dialogue with contemptuous tone. Tom Buchanan and Jay Gatsby are beginning to argue over Daisy and both are trying to have the control. Tom still knows nothing and Gatsby is informing him.

“Sit down Daisy. “ Tom’s voice groped unsuccessfully for the paternal note. “What’s been going on? I want to hear all about it.”...
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