Negative Thoughts on Social Media
(NOT FINISHED YET!)
Thesis-
I think that people should spend less time on social media and go outside, because they can get addicted very easily.
Outline-
I. Social, media, not, important 1. More, computer, than, friends 2. Friends, should, more, important 3. Media, taking, over, lives 4. Focus, more, important, things 5. Too, much, $, spent, media 6. End, life, not important
II. Go, outside, fresh, air 1. Outside, not, media 2. Media, distracts, from, outside 3. Inside, a lot, =, not, healthy 4. Spend, more, 5 hrs, daily 5. Some, stressed, need, air III. People, =, addicted, easily 1. Post, status, everything, do 2. Too, much, time, media 3. Media, =, huge, part, lives 4. Lack, ability, talk, person 5. Couldn’t, give, up, 4, day 6. Some, die, over, media
Rough Draft-
I think that social media is not all important. People are spending more time on it then hanging out with friends. Friends should be more important. For some people, social media is taking over their lives. They should focus on more important things and not spend so much money on it. In the end, it’s not important.
Instead of being inside on their media, they should go outside and get some fresh air and hang out their instead. Social media is starting to distract people from the outside world. Staying inside all day is not healthy for you. The average person spends more than five hours on their media daily. After all that time, people get stressed or mad that someone might have said something about them and they need fresh air.
The world is starting to get addicted to media and it’s spreading to other countries. Status updates are a big part of it. All people do is post a status of what they’re doing all day long. Altogether, people are spending way too much time on it. It’s a huge part of people’s lives and they’re losing the ability to interact with people in person.
Sources-
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Thesis-
I think that people should spend less time on social media and go outside, because they can get addicted very easily.
Outline-
I. Social, media, not, important 1. More, computer, than, friends 2. Friends, should, more, important 3. Media, taking, over, lives 4. Focus, more, important, things 5. Too, much, $, spent, media 6. End, life, not important
II. Go, outside, fresh, air 1. Outside, not, media 2. Media, distracts, from, outside 3. Inside, a lot, =, not, healthy 4. Spend, more, 5 hrs, daily 5. Some, stressed, need, air III. People, =, addicted, easily 1. Post, status, everything, do 2. Too, much, time, media 3. Media, =, huge, part, lives 4. Lack, ability, talk, person 5. Couldn’t, give, up, 4, day 6. Some, die, over, media
Rough Draft-
I think that social media is not all important. People are spending more time on it then hanging out with friends. Friends should be more important. For some people, social media is taking over their lives. They should focus on more important things and not spend so much money on it. In the end, it’s not important.
Instead of being inside on their media, they should go outside and get some fresh air and hang out their instead. Social media is starting to distract people from the outside world. Staying inside all day is not healthy for you. The average person spends more than five hours on their media daily. After all that time, people get stressed or mad that someone might have said something about them and they need fresh air.
The world is starting to get addicted to media and it’s spreading to other countries. Status updates are a big part of it. All people do is post a status of what they’re doing all day long. Altogether, people are spending way too much time on it. It’s a huge part of people’s lives and they’re losing the ability to interact with people in person.
Sources-
1.