Topic Sentence : Improvement in technology has had a negative effect on our society in many different ways.
Major Point 1 : Improvement in technical equipment has given us a way too easy life. Minor Point (a) : We will become lazy.
(b) : We will become irresponsible.
(c) : We will become very dependent.
Major Point 2 : The society relies on the improved Information Technology too much. Minor Point (a) : We search information online too directly and we missed out a lot of extra knowledge.
(b) : We may face the risk of cyber terrorism. (c) : It becomes a need in our life and we can’t do anything without it. Major Point 3 : The improvement of weapons will be misused on a wrong purpose. Minor Point (a) : The improvement in the power of advanced weapons will cause more death and damage to the world. (b) : The society will use the advanced weapons to gain more power or authorities. (c) : Modern warfare will create more pollution to the environment.
Improvement in technology has had a negative effect on our society in many different ways. In example, improvements in technical equipment have given us a way too easy life. We will become lazy if we use the technical equipment too often. We may also become irresponsible because we can just handle everything to the technical equipment and we don’t need to worry about it anymore. Other than that, we will become very dependent and we can’t do anything on our own like we used to be anymore without the assistance of technical equipment. Besides technical equipment, the society relies on the improved Information Technology too much. By using that, we search information too...