National Security vs Individaul Privacy

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ENG 122 English Compositions

Instructor: Jason Romero


Topic: Individual privacy vs. national security

1. Your document’s heading is not formatted correctly. In the upper left corner of the first page, the words "Running head:" should preface a shortened version of your title. The upper right corner of the page should have the numerical page number. The shortened version of your title should be in all capital letters. On subsequent pages, the shortened version of your title should appear on the lefthand side, with a page number on the right-hand side. For additional information, visit the Ashford Writing Center located in Constellation. Click on Ch 7 -Sample Paper with Formatting Instructions. [Nicole Moore] 2. Instructor: Leon, You should be using a 12 pt. font, and double spacing your work. [Nicole Moore]

Leon D. Williams



Throughout history, there have been breeches to the security of this nation which caused an increase in awareness. Rights and civil liberties of the public have been cut, and in many instances revoked completely. Individual privacy is 2


1. Throughout Leon, You are not using the correct font. You need to be using Times New Roman 12 pt. Please adjust for your final paper. Remember to use Times New Roman 12 point font per 6th edition APA guidelines. [Nicole Moore] 2. in awareness. an awareness of what? Make sure you are clear. [Nicole Moore] 3. Block quotations of more than 40 words should be double spaced per APA 6th edition guidelines. Each line should be indented 1/2 inch. Quotation marks should not be included, and the citation should be placed at the end of the quote following the punctuation. [Nicole Moore] 4. Since the attack on the World Trade... Leon, please try reading this sentence out loud - what are you trying to say? I think you might be missing some words. How might you rework? [Nicole Moore] 5. In response, law enforcement agencies... Are the agencies requesting them now, or have they been requesting them since 2001? You might want to use the past tense... or say, "..agencies have been requesting..." [Nicole Moore]

important and if you take it away from the public, they will then feel an increase of intrusion and loss of privacy. “All human rights are indivisible, interdependent, and interrelated: the improvement of one right facilitates advancement of the others; the deprivation of one right adversely affects others. Freedom of expression and privacy are explicit parts of this 3

international framework of human rights and are enabling rights that facilitate the meaningful realization of other human rights.” (Dunstan, 2011) Since the attack on the World Trade Center, U.S. soil have resulted in the tragic loss of thousands of innocent human lives. In response, law enforcement agencies are requesting broader and more pervasive laws to counter this security challenge. As technology has grown in leaps and bounds over the last three decades, it has also brought with it new challenges to protecting people’s privacy and curbing privacy violations. Determining the proper balance between citizens’ right, civil liberties, and concerns for security is a particularly vexing difficulty for the democratic societies. It has long been 4 5


understood that civil liberties are neither absolute nor unequivocal and that there is normally tension between the carrier for democratic values and the desire to live in safety and security. “Citizens’ rights frequently collide with the 1. “Citizens’ rights frequently collide... Great quote for right here. Double check the APA formatting guidelines - you want to put the period on the outside of the (). "...citizens" (Davis, 2008). [Nicole Moore]

rights of others and with governments’ ability to provide for the safety of its citizens.” (Davis, D. W. 2008) 1

National Security plays a part in every aspect of the world. What national security does is maintain the survival of

the state through the...
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