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Da'Juan Holcomb
Dr. Bond
English 101
9/14/13 Narrative Essay- 2012 Summer

The summer of 2012 was an exciting and fun summer for me. I had just move in with my mother, step- father, my sister ,step-sister, and step-brother. Before I moved in I would just visit on weekends, to see how it would be living with them again. Everything was great, there was no problems while I was there. Then I decided to move in with them. That was the biggest mistake I ever did in my life. But I did have good time there. There was so much drama going on this summer. Gregory (step-brother) is a very ignorant person. We started off as friend, but He was too cocky and full of himself. He would lie so much, talk about people and spread so many rumors. Gregory always came to me telling lies about his family to make them seem like they have lots of money. Im not the gullible type of person, so I asked his dad. Turns out what he said was not true at all. Then more lies came about. There was a point where I confronted him about these thing, and he just would have this shame look on his face. I told him he doesn’t have to lie to make some one else look good. Its a shame that some one would do that. I met his friends Chemar, Imari, Donald, and Javion. They were really cool kids. They were a couple years younger than me. The were mature guys so we became friends. Everybody would come over our house after school and chill in the house or on the porch. Gregory was always the asshole in the house. No one really liked him. His friends didn’t even really like him. When they met me they would say “we only come over her for you”. I didn’t know what was going on. Gregory talks about his friend behind their back to me, and my sisters. He would also talk about me to his friends and my sister. They told me everything he said to them. That became a problem to me because I trusted him. He even betrayed Donald. Donald was suppose to be one of his best friends. Donald was turned on by all of his friend, then Gregory did the same just because they were all friends. I didn’t want to just leave Donald hanging, we were still cool. Same thing happened Imari. They family went to Belle Isle Park. My little sister, Britney took her friend, which is chemar's little sister Nigeria. Me, Ashley, Britney, Gregory, Nigeria, Gregory's little sister (Angel) and their cousins were at the big swings. It was a big red round swing that could fit like three people. Gregory got on the swing first by himself. Nigeria, Angel, and his cousin pushed him. He was going really high, then he fell off, unharmed. Nigeria got the swing. Gregory was the only one to push her. He gave her a big push, which made her scared. She wanted to get off because it was too high. Gregory would not stop. Stop! Stop! She shouted. He wouldn't stop. Everybody was telling him to stop the swing. She tried to get off but her foot hit the ground so hard it broke twisted. She hopped over to the benches. My sister ashley and I went to check on her. Gregory didn't say sorry or check on her at all. She was crying and the veins in her foot popping out. I immediately carried her the car to tell my mother. We had to pack up and taker her to her mother. We dropped everyone off at my house and took Nigeria to her mother. I carried her to the door, sat her in a chair. My mom knocked on the door, her mother came to the door. We explained everything to her. She didn't have a way to the hospital, so we took them. On the way, we had to go back to the house. Her mom confronted Gregory about the situation. He lied to her and said she just had her foot out. We went to the hospital, dropped them off. On the way back home we seen Chemar and told him about his sister. He did not like Gregory that well before the accident. He was pretty mad. Then he walked away. His mother already told us that he doesn't play when it comes to his siblings. I knew what was going to happen....
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