My Birth Day

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Narrative Paragraph Due March 2
Name:______________Carlos Estrada ________________________________________ Date: ____________ Write a narrative paragraph about a time when you celebrated a special occasion. Your narrative paragraph should include a topic sentence and five to seven supporting sentences. Be sure to clearly show each step of the writing process in your submission: Step 1: Pre-writing (Generate ideas)My Last birth day Get to be with the family(girlfriend, parents, sister, little brother)Go eat with my love ones-cake, restaurantGo out to partying-clubbing A lot of gifts-money, clothes.| Step 2: Planning (Write an outline.)I. How I spend my birth day A. Go out to eat a. Dinner with the family b. CakeB. Gifts a. Money b. Clothes c. ShoesC. Go out to party a. Clubbing b. Night out with my friends| Step 3: Drafting and Revising (Write your first draft, fix it and rewrite it.)My Last Birth Day One of the most special occasions was my birth day, May 3th 2012, for me it was the more important day in the year.The day before my birth day I slept late and wake up late in the morning by my parents with hugs, kisses and messages from my girlfriend which is going to be my wife in a few months. After everyone gotready we went out to eat, went to the mall and bought me some new clothes, shoes and w/e they felt like buy me.Then, we went back to my house and WOW! My friends prepared me a surprised party, but that was not it. My Grandmother that I have not seen in years was there. We all had a good time and that is why I love my birth birth day May 3th 2012 simply the best day ever.| Step 4: Proofreading ( Rewrite and show corrections)My Last Birth Day One of the most special occasions was my birth day, May 3th 2012, for me it was the more important day of the year.The day before my birth day I slept late and wake up late in the morning by my parents with hugs, kisses and messages from my girlfriend which is going to be my wife in a few...
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