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As computers are being used more and more in
education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classrooms. Discuss.
In the age of high technology, beneficial effects of computers and the role of computers in the classromm have grown. Admittedly, computers have unique values,many functions, and they are the most popular device so far. Nonetheless, are they enough to replace the role of teachers in the classroom nowadays?
First of all, a lot of students say that well-educated and understanding teachers are as a water for a students who are thirsty for knowladge.In other words,the presence of those play an essential role in the classroom with their experience and advice for students the various strategies of teachers like being strict ,demanding, lenient ,will most likely depend on the students behaviour and personality. Although, computers can appeal and inspire students ,also capture more attention than teachers or books, some teachers are able to educate us to know feelings and judge what is right from wrong.They can explain something from theur experience and give extra exersises as well. For instance : When a students have any difficulties in their lives with their families or with different intellectual capasities which tutors can give moral support which technology can not provide.Moreover, studying in the group with teacher helps to improve their social skills.
On the other hand, currently, scientists have proven that ,every ckassroom need a trained machine to use and to have more interesting and innovate ways of learning. In fact, technology is recent dacades is getting increasingly popular even than before. Espically, with the information on...