Human Sexuality

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Human Sexuality
Human sexuality has a broad spectrum of factors including intimacy, sexual attitudes and behaviors, and consequences of sexual behavior. Human sexuality also can be broken down into categories such as Heterosexuality, Homosexuality and Bisexuality. All these dynamics make up a part of human sexuality and will help us to understand the meaning behind the topic under discussion. Even though it corrupts some relationships, human sexuality is an interesting subject because it affects everyone from birth and it affects key points in one’s life. References

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Human sexuality has a broad spectrum of factors including intimacy, sexual attitudes and behaviors, and consequences of sexual behavior. It also can be broken down into categories such as Heterosexuality, Homosexuality and Bisexuality. All of these dynamics make up a part of human sexuality and will help us to understand the meaning behind the topic under discussion. Even though it corrupts some relationships, human sexuality is an interesting subject because it affects everyone from birth and it affects key points in your life. (Introduction)

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My constructive feedback would be, that first of all you should Indenta beginning of a paragraph. I like your article, also just be careful to watch your punctuation marks. Also you mentioned that “Human relationships are corrupt, I think that is a subjective, and should reflect a broader language. You mentioned again a personal opinion, when you stated, “ thatadultery will go on in married couples lives”. That right there is a personal opinion, and not a fact. You can notcombine all married couples together in that situation. But overall, I think that your article was great. Keep up the good...
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