home school vs traditional school

COMPARE AND CONTRAST HOMESCHOOL AND TRADITIONAL SCHOOL
HOOK: In the future, students might have more opportunities to attend a home school and they can make a choice between home school or traditional school . Which would you prefer?
BACKGROUND: Parents often debate about the best place to educate their children and nowadays, they often must consider if homeschool or traditional school is the best choice.
THESIS: There are some similarities between home school and studying in a traditional school, however there are also many differences. I am going to discuss some similarities and differences between these two ways for (methods of) education.
BODY 1 First of all, let’s look at the similarities between these two methods of education. Both of these ways have a similar routine and a similar structure. For example, students can study the same subjects, have the same lunch break and do the same projects. In addition, both ways give students the chance to learn if they want to learn and develop their knowledge and develop their personality. Moreover, there is a similarity between the text books so the basic information on the course will be the same.
BODY 2 On the other hand, there are many differences between homeschool and traditional school.
For example, when a student studies at home, they are more individual because they have their own opinions, likes and dislikes. This means they have their own personality and other people have less influence. Also, students educated at home can learn faster, whereas in traditional schools too many things happen in the classroom and learning is usually slower. For this reason, students have a better chance to learn more at home. Finally, at a traditional schools students have the chance to socialize and make new friends, while at home they have just the teacher and they haven’t the same chance to develop their social skills.
CONCLUSION
RRESTATEMENT In conclusion, these are some of the similarities and differences between homeschool and traditional school. SUMMARYOn the one hand, they both have a similar routine, a similar chance to learn and the textbooks are also similar. On the other hand, they are different because homeschool is more individual, there are less chances to meet new friends and the learning is usually faster. OPINION Finally, if you go to homeschool or traditional school you still have to study a lot and really want to succeed, so in the end, I believe both of these ways give a student a good education.

Vocabulary
Nowadays
To consider
Must consider- have to think about
Chance - opportunity
To develop – to build up , increase
To develop social skills
Knowledge
Personality
Own – belongs to you only
More influence on someone- can change someone’s mind easily
Less influence on someone- can change someone’s mind easily
Basic-
Individual-
To socialize – to chat to and meet new people, chatting and talking
To be sociable – more chance to be sociable
To succeed – to come out positively and get what you want, achieve benefits