Good vs Evil Beowulf
Prompt: Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.
Leading sentence: An issue of national and international concern that is of importance to me is our current debate about the US helping Syria or not.
Main point: Syria is currently on a civil war between the Syrian government and the Syrian rebels.
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Transitional sentence: This war begin because of a religious rivalry between the Sunni and Shia Supporting point: Sunni are the minority in Syria and they also are part of the Syrian armed forces Or their army, Shia in the other hand is the rebels, and therefore the majority.
Evidence: being in the same religion as the rebels or the Syrian army does not mean that they all support the war.
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T sentence: If I had to choose between helping Syrian rebels or not, I would say no, innocent people are dying yes, but we don’t have enough evidence of the Syrian army using chemical weapons, on the other hand innocent people have died in the hands of the Syrian army whether they used chemical weapons or not.
Evidence: in order to attack them we at least should have some good credible evidence, if we don’t this could turn into another world war sense Syria has some powerful allies, which would result in even more people getting killed.
Rough Draft
An issue of national and international concern that is of importance to me is our current debate about the US helping Syria or not. Syria is currently on a civil war between the Syrian government and the Syrian rebels.
These wars begin because of a religious rivalry between the Sunni and Shia Sunni are the minority in Syria and they also are part of the Syrian armed forces or their army, Shia in the other hand is the rebels, and therefore the majority. Being in the same religion as the rebels or the Syrian army does not mean that they all support the war, some of them are just innocent citizens caught in a war that they did not necessarily wanted.
Leading sentence: An issue of national and international concern that is of importance to me is our current debate about the US helping Syria or not.
Main point: Syria is currently on a civil war between the Syrian government and the Syrian rebels.
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Transitional sentence: This war begin because of a religious rivalry between the Sunni and Shia Supporting point: Sunni are the minority in Syria and they also are part of the Syrian armed forces Or their army, Shia in the other hand is the rebels, and therefore the majority.
Evidence: being in the same religion as the rebels or the Syrian army does not mean that they all support the war.
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T sentence: If I had to choose between helping Syrian rebels or not, I would say no, innocent people are dying yes, but we don’t have enough evidence of the Syrian army using chemical weapons, on the other hand innocent people have died in the hands of the Syrian army whether they used chemical weapons or not.
Evidence: in order to attack them we at least should have some good credible evidence, if we don’t this could turn into another world war sense Syria has some powerful allies, which would result in even more people getting killed.
Rough Draft
An issue of national and international concern that is of importance to me is our current debate about the US helping Syria or not. Syria is currently on a civil war between the Syrian government and the Syrian rebels.
These wars begin because of a religious rivalry between the Sunni and Shia Sunni are the minority in Syria and they also are part of the Syrian armed forces or their army, Shia in the other hand is the rebels, and therefore the majority. Being in the same religion as the rebels or the Syrian army does not mean that they all support the war, some of them are just innocent citizens caught in a war that they did not necessarily wanted.