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Write a Narrative Essay about a quotation: “There are some things learned best in calm, some in storm” _ Willa Cather
Background information: If we want to grow, we have to learn a lot not only from books we read or stories we are told but also from our own stories. Thesis statement: Sometimes some lessons are better learned from a crisis in our life as Willa Cather said: “There are some things you learn best in calm, and some in storm” Changing sentence: Introducing who is Su
Topic sentence 1: All of the best things of my childhood are the moments when I was with Su, my best friend forever Supporting idea 1: My mom sent me to Su’s home so that she can go to work without any anxiety for some things bad happing to me; therefore, I and Su ate, slept, played, studied and did many other childlike things together with endless fun Supporting idea 2: We were extremely close to each other because we had a lot of same unique hobbies like going to sleep with a big fragrant towel… Supporting idea 3: We protected to each other from other aggressive children in our neighborhood whenever we played with them Topic sentence 2: Nothing lasts forever even though that friendship was my most beautiful thing of my childhood Supporting idea 1: Su was too sad to be interested in other things around her including our friendship and me owing to her parent’s divorce Supporting idea 2: At the new place, she gradually forgot her sorrow and almost all of what had been happening in her old house and got her new friends Supporting idea 4: I forced myself to...