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Absolute Perspective of Pogi
They call me Pogi. I am a four-legged, furry creature. God gave me this eyes that lets me see even from extreme distances also lets me see through sinister surroundings. He made me possess this ears that lets me perceive even the lightest of sounds. I can locate bits and pieces and deliver them to their owners because I have this sharp-smelling nose. I am a fine creation of the highest divinity.
I have my master. I don’t actually know his name since I only bark. But what I do know is that he is a great master. He feeds me well enough for me to be satisfied. And leaves me at home and lets me outside for me to enjoy my freedom.
I spend this time playing with these cute white oval objects. I hear my master calling them “yiggs”. I always break them and taste what’s inside but what I really do is consume all of them.
One day, my master came home and witnessed me playing with these “yiggs”. He yelled at me. I think he was happy seeing me having fun. Then he grabbed me at my collar, carried me and put me inside the car. I think we will be going somewhere where we could have fun together. I appreciated that he even lifted me. Perhaps he was so excited that he hopped right into the car.
We drove very fast. He wanted me to experience the thrill. And I did!
After some time, we stopped at what seems to me is a forest of some kind. He got out of the car and opened the door for me. I jumped out and then he got right back into it. Afterwards, he drove away without me. I had to think about this for a moment. And then I realized, “he wants me to be alone for me to experience ADVENTURE!”
I roamed around the area thinking about doing something amazing when I saw his wallet sitting on the ground. I realized, maybe he has prepared himself the adventure for me. Maybe he wants to test if I can go back home using only his wallet to capture his scent. He really is a great master.
And

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