Grade B+/ A-
This is a good essay.
The Story of an Hour
In life, “Some things are so unexpected that no one is prepared for them”. In this captivating short story, Mrs. Mallard’s character shows a mysterious young woman with “heart trouble” who takes the news of her husband’s presumed death as a sense of relief and birth of her freedom. Josephine, Louise Mallard’s sister gently tells her of her husband’s death thinking the news will devastate and make her “ill”, she’s grossly mistaken! Later when she (Mrs. Mallard) discovers her husband is still alive, she suffers a massive heart attack and dies. “Kate Chopin’s Story of An Hour”, suggests with symbolism, characterization and irony that in our daily lives, one’s death does not always cause grief to their “loved ones”.
Mrs. Mallard’s character in “The Story of an Hour” is confusing. At first she cries and mourns her husband, but later within minutes she’s showing emotions of joy,(; or . needed) this is a conflict of emotions. We also see that Mrs. Mallard’s sister Josephine is worried about her since she has a heart problem. She fears Louise may not be able handle the sad news of her husband’s death. “When the storm of grief had spent itself she went away to her room alone”.(quote not attached to sentence of text) At this point, I think she cannot hold her happiness back but at the same time(,) she cannot show Richards and her sister that she’s not sad any more.
Chopin uses symbolism to show that Louise felt free after learning of her husband’s death. The trees in the open square shaking with new spring life symbolize her new journey to freedom. “There would be no powerful will bending hers…” She believes a life without her over powering husband is joyous and harmonious since she can do whatever she wants without her husband holding her back. According to Chopin, women in those days had “no say” in the community; they were simply housewives to look after children and do home...