essay
Nicole Probst
MYP III
2°A #26
Summer
Teacher
Summer
Hot or cold, what could it be?
Summer is here just look and see
It's not winter or autumn here
Summer is something we shouldn't fear
Summer is out and it's time to play
Have fun because summer is not here to stay
Jump in the pool and play all day
Let's come on out and head for the bay
Summer time is once a year
Come on out without any fear
Plant some flowers for a summer day
As long as summer is here to stay
ANALYSIS
I think that the way that this poem is written shows you a lot of how a poem should be written correctly.
This is about summer and its mostly about things you can do in summer time.
The paragraphs are a little long and a bit more repeatedly about when and what things and stuff of summer.
The writing of the poem is very casual.
A Good-Bye & A Hello
Good-Bye sweet, sweet summer, must you always go away?
Oh how I shall miss your short warm nights and long hot days
For once can't you be here to stay?
This summer shall remain special to me
In my memory this summer will forever more be
No it wasn't a summer of love, loss, or mystery
But was a summer of realization
A summer of learning more about me
This Summer I asked questions about myself that I never did before
This summer I answered those questions honestly
Pondered many thoughts
And did so much more
This summer during the warm nights I looked up at the stars
And wondered if this lifestyle was for me
This summer I looked up at the stars
And was forced to answer honestly
If this was where I wanted to be
Oh summer even though I'll miss you so
A new season is around the corner
To Fall I must say hello
While I shall miss staring up at the stars
While the warm summer breeze plays with my hair
I won't mind the falling leaves or chilling air
While I'll miss being warmed by the sun's
MYP III
2°A #26
Summer
Teacher
Summer
Hot or cold, what could it be?
Summer is here just look and see
It's not winter or autumn here
Summer is something we shouldn't fear
Summer is out and it's time to play
Have fun because summer is not here to stay
Jump in the pool and play all day
Let's come on out and head for the bay
Summer time is once a year
Come on out without any fear
Plant some flowers for a summer day
As long as summer is here to stay
ANALYSIS
I think that the way that this poem is written shows you a lot of how a poem should be written correctly.
This is about summer and its mostly about things you can do in summer time.
The paragraphs are a little long and a bit more repeatedly about when and what things and stuff of summer.
The writing of the poem is very casual.
A Good-Bye & A Hello
Good-Bye sweet, sweet summer, must you always go away?
Oh how I shall miss your short warm nights and long hot days
For once can't you be here to stay?
This summer shall remain special to me
In my memory this summer will forever more be
No it wasn't a summer of love, loss, or mystery
But was a summer of realization
A summer of learning more about me
This Summer I asked questions about myself that I never did before
This summer I answered those questions honestly
Pondered many thoughts
And did so much more
This summer during the warm nights I looked up at the stars
And wondered if this lifestyle was for me
This summer I looked up at the stars
And was forced to answer honestly
If this was where I wanted to be
Oh summer even though I'll miss you so
A new season is around the corner
To Fall I must say hello
While I shall miss staring up at the stars
While the warm summer breeze plays with my hair
I won't mind the falling leaves or chilling air
While I'll miss being warmed by the sun's