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English 12 Original Composition Scale Point: 4 Comment The paper was awarded a 4 because although it follows a traditional expository format, it uses vague generalizations to support the topic. In addition, the student repeats the same ideas without specific support. The experiences we face and the challenges we over come help us to grow to maturity. Everyone learns from their mistakes and that enables them to grow emotionally and mentally. It is a natural thing to try and do something right because we all like the praise of others. We also might want to improve our situation so that we can gain more experience to become more mature. But not every challenge or situation will help us grow in the direction of maturity. Wanting to be mature and actually being mature are to different things. We can not tell ourselves that we are mature we just have to continue trying to be. We will never reach a stage where we can no longer mature. We are always changing our view, likes and dislikes, we just have to continue working on it. So we need to have a focus on what type of maturity we have. If we don’t ignore ourselves to different situations and challenges we won’t know how we will act. But if we are somewhat mature we will think before we act. Doing that will help us govern other disisions that we make bringing us that much farther to our maturity level. All of our challenges and decisions that we make make us grow. Whether we realize it or want to take advantage of it is up to us. We need to grown in our decision making because that makes life easier. It eliminates regretting decisions that we make. It also makes others feel good knowing that they can trust you. Growing changes who we are and that changes what we do and who our friends are. Having a different environment will make us realize how much we have grown. I also shows us how much more we need to grow. So all of us should experience new things and new situations. That way we can learn and grow to maturity. Doing...
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