The death penalty is one of the highest punishments of many Governments in the world. Some people believe that it is a violation of human right while others consider it a prevention of crimes. Personally, I am strongly agree with the latter. The death penalty, first of all, is benificial to society's security. Thanks to their fear of the strictest punishment, hardened criminals give up their harmful intentions such as killing or causing crimes. In addition, never do normal people dream of worry about violence that may put in their deprive them of freedom and make themlives danger. As a result, that/ the practice of capital punishment leads to a sharp drop in crime rate. Moreover, the assistance for economies is another advantage of applying the death penalty. After applying/imposing this kind of punishment, goverment may spend little financial resource on prison construction, prisoner nurture, and other related expenses. Therefore, they will have more budgets to develop key industries. Not only are there fewer economic losses related to criminals but also the economies may grow sustainablydue to citizen's safety feeling. To conclude, although there are some disadvantages of usage, the death penalty gives our society many advantages including both economy and security benefits. Therefore, the death penalty is absolutely reasonable in our society.
Death penalty, first of all, is to have a positive (has positive effect) on social security; with the rate of crime reduce (reducing) from 25% to 10% in Vietnam (Câu này diễn đạt không thoát ý, bạn có thể tách thành 2 câu, 1 câu topic và một câu support, như vậy bài của bạn vừa trông dài hơn, vừa dễ hiểu nhé) Another advantage of death penalty is (to) effect on economy. (tối nghĩa) Government does not expense so much for (expend too much money on) building prisons, feeding them and providing them with good facilities. In Vietnam, the death penalty’s implementation (the sentence of capital punishment) to serious crimes...
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