Topic: Disciplining Children with Corporal Punishment
Organization: value of fact
Specific purpose: To persuade my audience that non-physical forms of discipline are more ethical and effective INTRODUCTION
Attention getter: Astrid Lindgren-author of “Pippi Long stocking, told a story of how she was young with her first child and didn’t believe in striking and spanking kids, although spanking kids with a switch pulled from a tree was standard punishment at the time. One day when her son was four or five, he did something that warranted a severe spanking-the first of his life. She told him that, he would have to go outside and find a switch for her to hit him with. The boy was gone a long time, and when he came back, he was crying. He said to his mama, “Mama, I couldn’t find a switch, but here’s a rock that you can throw at me.” All of a sudden the mother understood how the situation felt from the child’s point of view that if my mother wants to hurt me, it makes no difference what she does it with; she might as well do it with a rock. The mother took the boy onto her lap, and they both started crying. Then she laid the rock on a shelf in the kitchen to remind herself forever: never violence. And that is something I think everyone should keep in their mind because violence begins in the nursery, one can raise children into violence. Relevancy statement: putting an end to corporal punishment will result in positive changes in behaviors of children with time Credibility: I have a whole lot of experience in child discipline as I have lived in Africa for 14 yrs. I have experienced corporal punishment from switches of trees, to belt slapping. Hitting or spanking a child will only teach them violence. If the child learns to behave, that’s for sure out of fear which is temporary. It is more effective to explain to the child why their behavior was wrong and devise a reasonable punishment Transition: Firstly, let’s look at what corporal punishment...