I chose to compare the poems: An Anniversary, by Vernon Scannel Dismissal, by John Tripp A Winters Tale, by D.H. Lawrence
In the poem “An Anniversary” the poet describes the relationship and it’s breakdown as two leaves on a river, this is and example of ‘Personification’. In contrast to this poem in the poem “Dismissal” Tripp describes the breakdown very much as it was, describing two people in a dreary pub, this is an example of ‘Pathetic fallacy’ as the setting is very boring and dark like the breakdown of the relationship. In “A Winters Tale” Lawrence uses a similar verse-craft to Scannel in “An Anniversary” with the relationship being described as a field but he still uses people in the poem to describe the people in the relationship. Lawrence also uses ‘Pathetic Fallacy’ as he describes a cold winter’s day when the relationship broke down.
In “An Anniversary” the poet says:
“The sky’s smeared monotone.”
This means the sky was smeared with one colour, which may signify a boring colourless relationship. “Two willow leaves glide smoothly on
The water’s shimmering skin;”
This is an example of ‘Enjambment’. It describes the leaves floating smoothly but apart from each other. The use of enjambment here helps the rhythm of the poem carry on smoothly like the leaves gliding. It could signify the two people still going on in life smoothly but not together. When he says “the water’s shimmering skin” it gives the impression of being murky below and shiny on top. This could show there is more to the relationship than what people see initially or that when the relationship was still happening it may have looked alright to everyone else watching but there were things going on beneath the surface that weren’t alright. “Once, on a branch in the sun, they danced
And often touched each other;
They will not touch each other again,”
In the relationship this signifies that they were once happy together but now they will never be together again. It could also mean that from the beginning the relationship would never last as all leaves fall off their branch so the relationship was doomed to failure.
The poet uses a lot of contrasts in this poem:
“The sky’s smeared monotone.”
“Once, on a branch in the sun, they danced”
This contrasts the happiness in the relationship before the breakdown to the boring monotone they have between each other now. The poet uses vivid imagery all the way through the poem to describe the two leaves; he also uses “Personification” the way that he describes the two leaves as people. The tone of the poem changes as at the beginning when the poet is describing the relationship now it is quite morose, as the two leaves are no longer together. At the end he is describing the relationship before the breakdown and the tone is quite happy. This is an example of ‘Pathetic Fallacy’ as the tone reflects and complements what the poet is talking about. Some examples of “Alliteration” in the poem are: “stream slides”
They are all S sounds, this complements the flowing, smooth, gliding rhythm of the poem.
In the poem “Dismissal” the poet describes the relationship breakdown very much like a story. In the whole poem he uses “Enjambment” and the poem has a very continuous rhythm he also doesn’t use rhyme or assanance which also adds to...