I noticed quite a few errors in my writing, after submitting my paper to Write Point. There were a few suggestions that I disagreed with. But, for the most part I agreed the suggestions that Write point made. For Example, I noticed that I was repeating the word feel and also, that it was a very vague word. Write Point suggested that I use think or believe instead. I also noticed that I had used wordiness to take up space a couple times. I also had a problem in my punctuation with adding too many commas. However, by making the changes that Write Point... [continues]
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