Only available on StudyMode
  • Download(s) : 62
  • Published : February 10, 2013
Open Document
Text Preview
11. I think that by substituting the words “with religious freedom” for “under god” is a good thing to do. Like Gwen Wilde said in her essay “several millions Americans do not believe in God”. By changing the words “under God” to “with religious freedom” all citizens and new citizens can feel comfortable saying the Pledge of Allegiance.

By taking out “under God” from the Pledge of Allegiance and inserting “with religious freedom” in its place it would be an improvement to the Pledge of Allegiance. Most citizens of America are affiliated with some sort of religion, so by having the words “under God” in the Pledge of Allegiance does not affect them at all. Even though a large portion of the population in the United States does not mind having “under God” in the Pledge of Allegiance we cannot forget about the fraction of people that does not feel comfortable saying “under God” every time they recite the Pledge of Allegiance. Some people feel so uncomfortable saying “under God” that they do not recite the Pledge of Allegiance all together. Even though they are faithful to America they cannot find it in themselves so say the words “under God” because they do not believe in God. When people that do not believe in God do not recite the Pledge of Allegiance it sometimes starts conflict, because some people find this unpatriotic and disrespectful. By changing the words “under God” to “with religious freedom” would solve many problems.

I believe that substituting “with religious freedom” for “under God” would be a good decision. If this were to happen it will help prevent conflict between citizen, and all citizens would be comfortable reciting the Pledge of Allegiance not just the most of the citizens of America.
tracking img