A Project Proposal Presented to the Faculty of the
Institute of Information Technology
Davao del Norte State College
New Visayas, Panabo City
In Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Subject
System Analysis and Design
Jasmine C. Oribia
Erasmo T. PitaoJr
Gretchen M. Rendon
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Background of the Project
The advent of technology is consistently changing. (You used ‘advent’ so you better use “the technological modernization” to be more specific. Change the word ‘changing’ with progressing or something like that, to unite the concept on the succeeding paragraphs)
There are several benefits of using technology nowadays in a company and it gives more efficient way of getting the company’s goal. The demand of the technology today is highly appreciated and it is the easiest way of motivating the business towards success. (The business is the one that demands technology, not technology itself because it demands raw resources which is way too far on the study’s point. So if based on the business’ necessity, why would it be appreciated or either motivate success?) Nowadays all establishments are becoming modernized; they use modern technology to make a transaction fast, easy, and accurate in order to avoid and lessen the time consumed, and having a modern technology in an establishment protects and while secures securing confidential information. It also helps human to solve and understand complex problem and analysis such us the computational need of humans. Especially to business establishment or corporation processing enormous data and complex transaction, payroll is an example of complex transaction because it is a critical business operation dealing with numerous accounts, and produces plenty of confidential files. (Over using words must be corrected.)
Moreover technology is about meeting human needs through the creative process of designing and making. Technology capability is acquired through the two profile components of design and technology and information technology. (Make the statement more vivid. Check the punctuation if needed. What are these two profile components?)
With this the researchers come up with a good idea to elevate the business of Alonzo Company, owned by Mr. and Mrs. Marshal Alonzo. The business operated manually in ten years. So the researchers decided to help the company to be operated in computerized basis.
The company has 25 employees, including the staff, driver, and the helper of the driver. In every transaction of delivery there are is a particular driver and the driver has also one or two helpers. The helper or helpers will be the assistant of the driver in every delivery of the products. The company has a three classifications of the products which are pads, top and bottom and these products has have a corresponding rate. In every distance of their delivery there is own a specified delivery rate and the rate will depend on how long the distance the driver will travel.
Started in Starting year 2000, this the company is one of the certified tracking companies in Panabo city. It means that Alonzo Company accepts contract from the company that they will be serving. The company has more than 10 trucks to be used in different delivery transaction. The trucks travelled in different places of the said province and the truck has its own plate number. The company has different clients and the payment of their clients (try consumers or...