Betsy

Fernando Lloret Barceló
                                    Betsy Parks
                                    ESL 3
              Mini test 1 / Integrate Writing
                                                  College Writing Seminar
                                                                                                                                                          08/03/11
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This paragraph is about how was discovered for first time the bottom of the ocean and how they did it.
Scientist were thinking until 1977 that there was no life at the bottom of the ocean because the only thing they knew about it is that there was no light that deep and they had prove that on the surface it is living beings because of the sun light. They didn´t have the way to get that deep inside and prove it so they were just guessing. One   day In 1977 some scientists sent a submarine to check out the bottom of the ocean to see for first time what was happening and be sure if there was live or not that deep inside. At the beginning they couldn´t see anything, but the submarine had lights and when they turned on the lights they got a surprise because they saw something that didn’t expect it, the ocean was completely full of living beings.
In conclusion scientist finally knew more about the ocean and discovered hundreds of living animals.
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