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There was a very big tree that was curve to the swamp surrounded with lots of tree.
It was like a small forest in the (a) big city for me.
That was one of the pictures I found in my childhood (memory ko thiết ở đây).
My friend invented( dùng found sẽ hợp lí hơn, bạn cháu ko thể phát minh ra 1 thứ đã có sẵn được) this place.
My friend found this place.
It was far from our house about thirty minutes on walk. chú nghĩ dùng thế này sẽ đỡ rối hơn:
It took us 30’ to get there on foot.
( ngta ngầm hiểu nó xa nhà cháu 30’ đi bộ, và ko dùng on walk, phải on foot.)
When I saw this place at the first time, it was really a wonderful place. ( nếu nói như vầy, nghĩa là lần đầu cháu thấy, nơi này rất đẹp; ngta sẽ đặt câu hỏi THẾ NHỮNG LẦN SAU THÌ KO ĐẸP NỮA HAY SAO?)
When I saw this place at the first time, I thought it was really/ such a wonderful place.
There was nobody here[, except (just only)] but (muốn nhấn mạnh thì dùng BUT- BUT ở đây ko có nghĩa là nhưng, nghĩa là MÀ CHỈ CÓ) a big swamp and lots of trees.
There was nobody there but a big swamp and lots of trees./ There were just a big tree with a swamp and noone else./ Nobody was there, just a big tree and a swamp.
But the one thing that was noticeable me and my friends was the big tree that was curve to the swamp.
We were noticeable in the big tree that curved to the swamp ( chú ko rõ ý cháu là gì, nhưng nếu là diễn tả cái cây chồm ra ngoài cái đầm thì dùng THAT WAS CURVE TO THE SWAMP ko đúng, chú chỉ sửa phần đầu câu thôi)
Its shiny green leaves and green blanket kept me cool in muggy summer days.
Its shiny green leaves were like a green blanket that kept me….
The tree would often dance in the wind, shaking its branches shook everytime the wind blew over, that made the leaves fall.
Everytime there was a wind blew over, this tree shook its branches to the left then to the right just like it was dancing with the wind. That made some leaves fall down.
This was so attractive that passers-by
It was like a small forest in the (a) big city for me.
That was one of the pictures I found in my childhood (memory ko thiết ở đây).
My friend invented( dùng found sẽ hợp lí hơn, bạn cháu ko thể phát minh ra 1 thứ đã có sẵn được) this place.
My friend found this place.
It was far from our house about thirty minutes on walk. chú nghĩ dùng thế này sẽ đỡ rối hơn:
It took us 30’ to get there on foot.
( ngta ngầm hiểu nó xa nhà cháu 30’ đi bộ, và ko dùng on walk, phải on foot.)
When I saw this place at the first time, it was really a wonderful place. ( nếu nói như vầy, nghĩa là lần đầu cháu thấy, nơi này rất đẹp; ngta sẽ đặt câu hỏi THẾ NHỮNG LẦN SAU THÌ KO ĐẸP NỮA HAY SAO?)
When I saw this place at the first time, I thought it was really/ such a wonderful place.
There was nobody here[, except (just only)] but (muốn nhấn mạnh thì dùng BUT- BUT ở đây ko có nghĩa là nhưng, nghĩa là MÀ CHỈ CÓ) a big swamp and lots of trees.
There was nobody there but a big swamp and lots of trees./ There were just a big tree with a swamp and noone else./ Nobody was there, just a big tree and a swamp.
But the one thing that was noticeable me and my friends was the big tree that was curve to the swamp.
We were noticeable in the big tree that curved to the swamp ( chú ko rõ ý cháu là gì, nhưng nếu là diễn tả cái cây chồm ra ngoài cái đầm thì dùng THAT WAS CURVE TO THE SWAMP ko đúng, chú chỉ sửa phần đầu câu thôi)
Its shiny green leaves and green blanket kept me cool in muggy summer days.
Its shiny green leaves were like a green blanket that kept me….
The tree would often dance in the wind, shaking its branches shook everytime the wind blew over, that made the leaves fall.
Everytime there was a wind blew over, this tree shook its branches to the left then to the right just like it was dancing with the wind. That made some leaves fall down.
This was so attractive that passers-by